Project link: https://www.telescopictext.org/text/jlqmHtoJL3gfM

1. In this story, I was trying to describe my first time visiting TD Garden, the home stadium of the Boston Celtics and Boston Bruins, and how this experience has impacted me and has resonated with me throughout my life.

2. Something about this story and Telescopic Texts in general that is appealing to me is that we are able to unfold our stories little by little, which I think gives the story an interesting aspect that makes me want to read more.

3. Something I would like feedback on is how well I described the events, and if there was anything that I could've added to make it more interesting and appealing.